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The overall emotion feeling of the poem was happy and sad. I love this poem because it has such a great moral. This poem relates to another piece of literature that I have read because other poems are about giving and receiving. This poem relates to the media because of Christmas and how people are giving and recieveing. This relates to my life because I ask for things in my life and I don't always get the direct thing but I get something close. I think authors probably use similes and metaphors  the most as literary devises  they probably also use otomatapiea, and personification but there are probably many more. This author doesn't use many descriptive words. I think this because younger kids can understand it  better so it doesn't have many hard words to understand. The title fits this poem because the tree really gives him all she's got and is still happy. The Giving Tree one of the saddest poems and best poems ever

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I relate to this because I had many things I said wrong that I got teased for like Shane did. Ican relate to being bullied not that I was but I can imagine it.
The overall emotional feeling was sad ,depressed ,bullied and hurt. I love this poem because it is sad and I really apreciatte  everything he said and he is totally right. I feel this way because I can relate to almost all of it.
This relate's to other poems because  other poems are about bullying and bring emotion too you. I noticed a few rhyming parts which other poems have too. The last reason it relates is because it has a message, which other poems have. This relates to media because it talks about beauty and bullying and so does media. This relates to my life because I can see it in other people.
I think authors probably use similes and metaphors  the most as literary devises  they probably also use otomatapiea, and personification but there are probably many more. I think the author uses many descriptive words, I think this because it was effective with such good words. The title makes perfect sense because he used " To this day" a couple times. To this day is a wonderful poem.

Why Won't I smoke?

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Easy for me to answer that question...
It's bad for you!!
 I think smoking is really bad it does such bad stuff to you. It is also so expensive I mean after a year of buying cigarettes you could buy a house and about three cars. Or two vacations. I don't want to get addicted  it would scare me. It might not even taste good. YOu start looking really gross and your finger nails go yellow along with your teeth. You get all wrinkly almost everywhere. I have a choice to smoking and I say NO!!!

    Division 1 Means To Me

Division 1 means to me, we are the oldest class, and we do lots of fun stuff for the school. To be the oldest you have to be very responsible.  Being the oldest means we have to be good role models, we get to help in assemblies, we get to go around classrooms and do recycling and juice box’s, and lots more things. You have to be responsible about being the oldest and acting the oldest by being good role models, being quiet in assemblies and listening to Mr. Dorland’s instructions. It is important to be a role model because it shows younger kids that the oldest people in school are the most respectful and the most helpful. As the oldest in the school you have great responsibility.

             Here’s what I think about responsibility. I think our class hasn’t been doing homework lately. Lots of people have not been listening or doing their homework. To be responsible you would have to finish your homework, work hard, and help out around school and in your class.

             To be a positive role model, you must try to be quiet anywhere at all times (unless we are in band/music). If we were Safe, Helpful, Accountable, Respectful, and Positive (S.H.A.R.P), the younger kids would start to act more S.H.A.R.P. If we were quiet in the assemblies the other kids would be quiet. That is why we should become better leaders of the school.

             I need to improve on being quiet in assemblies, walking in the hall quietly, working hard, listening well, not talking with my friends too much, and handing in my homework. There are probably many more things. If I improve on these I will be a better leader.

            We should be great leaders. Right now we are NOT good leaders. Our class hasn’t been responsible. If we could change that and everyone tried to improve, we would be great positive role models. (And we would not have to write any more essays). We would be leaders of the school.

           

           

           

                          

   

My S.M.A.R.T Goals

Long-term goal: My S.M.A.R.T academic goal is to finish my homework 95% of the time. My Short-term S.M.A.R.T academic goal is that I finish 70% or more of my homework at school in the year. My Social long term S.M.A.R.T social goal is I want to get better at communicating with 5 people I know and don’t know this year. My Social short term S.M.A.R.T  goal is that I have a conversation with someone I don’t know on Edmodo every week.
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